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malis~
Young Vampire

Akkii's RL BFF

~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3]

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This world Aug 17, 2008 10:47:02 GMT -8

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Post by malis~ on Aug 17, 2008 10:47:02 GMT -8

What is the feeling of being confused?

You ask your friends,
But they don't know.
You beg and plead and scream,
Help Me!

Ohhh! What is this world?
Of new faces and dark places.
Just to find home.
Ohhh! What is this world?
Just close your eyes,
it's all a dream.

I should tell him should I?
Most the time I think that's right.
Half of me says not to.

You look at him he smiles at you.
The next thing is he kisses you.
I fight to break free!

Ohhh What is this world?
Of new faces and dark places.
Just to find home.
Ohhh! What is this world?
Just close your eyes,
it's all a dream.

The room is spinning...

Why won't he let me go?!

What should I do, I can't get through to him...

Push away my conscious says.
I close my eyes and think,
Why Me!

Ohhh! What is this world?
Of new faces and dark places.
Just to find home.
Ohhh! What is this world?
Just close your eyes,
it's all a dream.

He looks at me I look at him.
What do I say? I say,
Thank-you.

Just close your eyes,
it's all a dream.

I wanted this to be a poem. But it sounds like a song to me. What do you think? Please post your comments and I will try and and answer them all.
Thank-you!

Signed,
~Mals~

Last Edit: Jan 17, 2009 13:12:26 GMT -8 by malis~

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Platinum Assistant Administrator You can rewrite your past to a certian degree, but you cannot rewrite yourself %%Care to Take a Walk?%%[Mo0:0] Posts: 8,482	This world Aug 17, 2008 11:20:02 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Platinum on Aug 17, 2008 11:20:02 GMT -8 Intresting ^^

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 17, 2008 11:26:10 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 17, 2008 11:26:10 GMT -8 Thanks! My uncle's Going to help me make the music!
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malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 17, 2008 11:27:12 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 17, 2008 11:27:12 GMT -8 It kinda reminds me of spike and angel's story in i walk a lonley road!
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Platinum Assistant Administrator You can rewrite your past to a certian degree, but you cannot rewrite yourself %%Care to Take a Walk?%%[Mo0:0] Posts: 8,482	This world Aug 17, 2008 11:32:36 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Platinum on Aug 17, 2008 11:32:36 GMT -8 Awesome, Do you sing? Thanks for reading my fanfic, by the way ^^

Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 17, 2008 12:05:48 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 17, 2008 12:05:48 GMT -8 Yeah, Mali's one of the most amazing singers. You should really hear her voice. She's a thousand times better than me. ;D

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 17, 2008 19:50:13 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 17, 2008 19:50:13 GMT -8 Pardin my french but... shut-up!
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Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 17, 2008 20:07:59 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 17, 2008 20:07:59 GMT -8 What? I'm being nice... 0.0 btw- Why the HECK did you ban me from your site?

Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 17, 2008 20:09:52 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 17, 2008 20:09:52 GMT -8 Oh, and no, I wasn't yelling, I just annunciated the word heck. XD I'm not mad at you. A little sad. I know you probably did it on accident and since you did, then I'm not mad.

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 18, 2008 14:53:57 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 18, 2008 14:53:57 GMT -8 I'm soooooooooo SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 19, 2008 12:11:39 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 19, 2008 12:11:39 GMT -8 It okay. ;D

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 19, 2008 13:06:15 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 19, 2008 13:06:15 GMT -8 sniffs I sound like Ritsu...sniff
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Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 21, 2008 12:39:45 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 21, 2008 12:39:45 GMT -8 XDDDD Yep! You sure do! ;D

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 21, 2008 13:11:02 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 21, 2008 13:11:02 GMT -8 Not helping!
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Akkii Administrator Oh What Tangled Webs We Weave When We Practice To Deceive %%First Class What?%%[Mo0:8] Posts: 9,466	This world Aug 21, 2008 13:16:04 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Akkii on Aug 21, 2008 13:16:04 GMT -8 I was joking!

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 21, 2008 13:45:15 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 21, 2008 13:45:15 GMT -8 i know!
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NioChan Guest	This world Aug 22, 2008 11:27:51 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by NioChan on Aug 22, 2008 11:27:51 GMT -8 It Does Soud Like A song You Know!! LAWL!!! ;D

malis~ Young Vampire Akkii's RL BFF ~House of Night= <3~%%Looking Up%%[Mo0:3] Posts: 357	This world Aug 22, 2008 14:49:58 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by malis~ on Aug 22, 2008 14:49:58 GMT -8 Thank ya!
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