Temtation

[(~*R @ z i*~)]

((First person veiw of Cory when he met the love of his life.))

I could feel that the contacts I had put in had been burned. BUt I didn't put new ones in. I didn't care. Keeping my face to the ground, I listened intently, and breathed deeply.

Then her scent hit me. I could almost taste her blood. I didn't dare look up, and I held my breath. If I did, I would lose conrtol. I decided to walk to the food court. Maybe the smell of Mexican food would drive it out.

Turns out she was there. My throat was on fire as her smell floated around my nose. I bit my tongue, and twisted my hands, but nothing could stop me from looking up. She noticed me staring at her, and thens when it all started.

[Platinum]

Lol, sorry. But it make me laugh, in a good way. I feel sorry for Cory XD

It's a good short story, are you going to add a little more?

[(~*R @ z i*~)]

Later on