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Post by twilightfreak on Sept 13, 2008 14:38:12 GMT -8
4-18-08
Dear Diary, I hate my life more and more each day everyone thinks im crazy but im not i have a father in jail for rapping my cousin and my mom is on drugs.I need to break free just to be safe i hate my mom cause she hits me because she is sad i lie to my friends about my scars and say "oh its from iceskating or my dogs."My friends at school hate me stare at me and yell i just need a hug but how can thay tell.I love a boy who tryed to do IT with me but i told him "NO" just slapped him and walked away.but now it late my mom's all drunk i hear her footsteps on our hardwood floor.All of a sudden i hear my older sister walk in she is mad at my mom cause she is drunk again.All of a sudden i see my mom's shadow hitting my sister but than to my sudden attention is not her hand my mom is hitting her with it a knife.My eyes could not belive it.I hear the cry of my sister and the blood gushing i run out my room and yell at my mom "STOP" but she just keeps on haulering,yelling,and laughs.She looks at me with her eyes cold as the river and she pulls the knife up 3-4-5-6 times she stabs me in my heart i fall to the floor and start to bleed and cry "why." Hi my name is ? cause my mom never named me i am 7yrs old and today my mom killed me
sincerly, ?????????
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Post by Akkii on Sept 14, 2008 13:54:40 GMT -8
Oh, hey! You showed me that story once Savanna. Why'd you put a laughing icon? It's a sad song. xP Would you let me edit your story a bit?
By the way, where are you in Twilight right now? ;D
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Post by Platinum on Sept 19, 2008 17:45:55 GMT -8
I like the story, but I have a small crit. The ending is a little unrealistic, you would die in a millisecond if you got stabbed in the heart.
The rest is good!
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Post by Akkii on Sept 20, 2008 19:40:26 GMT -8
It's just a little story she wrote. I found it very sad the first time I heard it. She's a good writer, but needs to work on spelling and stuffs. XDDDDDD Oh, and proper grammer. XDDDD
No offense Shavanna! ^_^
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Post by Platinum on Oct 4, 2008 17:18:09 GMT -8
I see lots of potental =D I have bad spelling, too XDDDD
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Post by (~*R @ z i*~) on Oct 19, 2008 15:24:41 GMT -8
Who DOESN'T have bad spelling these days? XD
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Post by Akkii on Oct 24, 2008 15:00:18 GMT -8
I don't... >.> <.<
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Post by malis~ on Dec 24, 2008 20:32:21 GMT -8
OF CORSE JADE! XDDDD =cries at story= can't take it!
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